Calcan Gabriel
UAUIM - Ion Mincu University of Architecture and Urban Planning
Romania
Architecture
The idea of the project is born from the desire to preserve the existing constructions and the need to express the architects through new ecological systems.
Why not use openstreetmaps that allow you to easily load project surroundings and nearby buildings? You still use white buildings for the immediate area, so it would be a good idea overall and the exact context would be clear right away. Link for tutorial: https://youtu.be/Msjkpy7Pn9o
Try not to crop the visualization and focus more on the composition. A larger focus would also help.
Empty areas and the absence of sidewalk details and the like spoil the impression. It's a pity, just put there the common elements that are available in the exterior library.