Luan Fontes
University of Porto (UP), Faculty of Architecture (FAUP), Porto
Brazil
Architecture
Out of sight: Sustainable dance school and emergency social housing in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
During the development of the project, it is taken as objective the idea of returning it to local residents, paying attention to their needs and considering the bucolic environment, the easy arrival by sea, the steep terrain around it and the lack of public devices, in order to ensure basic services to citizens, not only of Frades Island, but of Maré as a whole, and taking in consideration the historic-social process of the local. This way, during the conception, it was conscious the constant…
Feedback A
The foreground of the visualization is unnecessarily crowded with various effects and objects. Puddles, wear, distinctive texture, etc. together create an almost unreadable area from which it is not clear whether it is a road, sidewalk, forest path or something else. The possibility is to remove those elements or to create a mirror reflection of the house in the pools and add more to make up most of the area. Apart from this confusing element, however, the visualization is well done! From the top line, the picture is completely professional.
Feedback A/2
Personally, I would remove the car. In my opinion, it takes a lot of attention in an otherwise clean visualization.
Feedback B
I like this cutout. For better realism, just add a few details. For example, undergrowth to tree trunks or concrete elements. Slight local imperfections and wear on materials. Or maybe splashing water behind a bike. But it is definitely a great job even without it.
Feedback C
This is very similar to the last picture. For better realism, just add a few details, or rather improvements. The building opposite, which shows the context, is excellent. I like the composition.
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