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# positive artistic
Vertical Research HUB
2D/3D FEEDBACK
The image is very uniform, uninteresting in color. The dramatic sky disappears in the context of the same color of the surrounding buildings and the main design. However, the main idea of the picture, as I perceive it, to show a dramatic transition and highlight the main building, is great. I would prefer to divide the image into two parts. I would make the right part with the main design more contrasting, brighter, sharper. The sky could turn brighter in this part. The left part could remain as it is. In my opinion, this would emphasize the importance of the building.
Vyrůstal jsem na Heršpické
2D/3D FEEDBACK
It is probably not entirely appropriate to comment on this presentation from the point of view of 2D / 3D feedback. The choice of an animated story with lyrics is very pleasant. It builds on what most human communication is about - stories. For me, this is an ideal example of how to do visualizations and project presentations differently. I do not evaluate the quality of texts or architecture now, it is not for me. But the form of presentation - visualization is perfect and funny.
I recommend everyone to see the whole project.
Otevřenost
2D/3D FEEDBACK
It is also good to use a 2-point perspective even in interiors. If you look at the blue lines, the space shown in this way can be confusing for the observer.
Otevřenost
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Space is quite empty. Red lines shows interesting stuf, you should add more objects, or use better camera position and setting ( focal distance ). Placing more objects or people will help.
God's Architect
2D/3D FEEDBACK
This is just perfect. What I see is a clear message that shows organic design. This is in the context of classic buildings. The problem is, of course, with the level of detail, but this can be expected and for the first impression it is successful. Bleech and the camera filter give it a pleasant atmosphere.
Living Apartment Interior for Tattoo Artist
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I like the colors and the design of this picture but the character in the middle takes a little too much attention. On the one hand, it's good, because it's hard to tear yourself away from a picture, but the question is what is presented here.
House of Culture and Rest
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Nice picture. Weird shapes, materials presentation, weird color filter, weird leaves in the air :) It fits nicely together.
But to be honest, i do not understand this bulding at all.
Zahradní město / Green city
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Using a 2-point perspective is nice because it simplifies the image for the observer. In this case, where the complex design is pictured, its use is important.
Zahradní město / Green city
2D/3D FEEDBACK
The picture shows a huge object, but relatively few figures. But more importantly, it is not entirely clear what the characters have room to do. To show space usage means to instantly improve the quality of visualization. I assume he should live in the building, but he doesn't look uninhabited. This is perhaps a simple thing to improve. Bring more life and interactions to the visualization. Not only by placing more people, but also by decoration.
Institution for cartoon and comic art
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I like idea, that comic art museum is presented as a comic art. But maybe it can be presented (just an idea) with some famous comics paterns. Shape of building is complex and i think it is possible to connect it with such a graphic elements.
S Squares
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Great axonometry, explains the whole mass clearly and the color palette is interesting. Well done.
SANRAKSHAN : A Marine and Coastal Biodiversity Centre in Mumbai
2D/3D FEEDBACK
It´s a pity you don´t use those linearts on this front page. You have amazing 2D skills and it´s a pity you don´t show them off right here at the beginning to catch the viewer´s attention.
Multistory residential building in Novorossiysk town
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I would add more greenry.
Multistory residential building in Novorossiysk town
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I really like the composition.
New concert hall for Prague at Vltavská Street/ Nová koncertní síň pro Prahu na Vltavské
2D/3D FEEDBACK
All these shots are very pleasant and colorful. It would perhaps only be appropriate to add a detailed element here, close to the camera, which would make some other sense of simplicity. Or maybe just add a flower pot with a flower?
LIVEABLE BEIRUT. Beirut port restoration project
2D/3D FEEDBACK
This is a quality and pleasant project processing. It just looks pretty gloomy in color. I would personally appreciate more colors, lighter shades and some distinctive elements that attract attention. Because purely graphically, when it's in the crowd of other works, it just won't be visible. Of course, you need to use colors sparingly.
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