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# positive composition
Beirut : Junction City Project
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When showing public space on this scale, it is good to add more interactions between people. The first look falls on the building, which is positive, then it would like further interest in people's interactions. You should introduce observers to the use of space.
Industrial Project 2: Meat Processing Factory
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Whole visual is very pleasing, very clean and easily understandable. A little tip though - I would probably stay consistent with colours throughout the whole brochure layout - this time mostly red and green is used in previous pictures. No need to change them here to orange.
Industrial Project 2: Meat Processing Factory
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The general visual representation is great, although on this specific picture i would add a bit of saturation and light mostly to the main object to make it stand out more and catch the eye. Red is a very strong color and it should make the image really vibrant. Also the guy in the left foreground is a bit disturbing.
The IDEA MARKET - A CREATIVE TRADING HUB AT PORTFOUAD/EGYPT
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Truly amazing visualisation. Explanatory, great color correction and the right contrast for the most important part. Using a dark water material makes the project really stand out from the image.
The IDEA MARKET - A CREATIVE TRADING HUB AT PORTFOUAD/EGYPT
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I would make all the people completely non-transparent since it adds to the photorealism.
The IDEA MARKET - A CREATIVE TRADING HUB AT PORTFOUAD/EGYPT
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Great composition, but once again the people are weirdly disappearing from the picture since they´re not opaque.
Proposed Condominium Design, Èkó Altantic, Lagos, Nigeria
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Great model and composition. In this project I generally like how a well-done model is used to showcase all of the project aspects, to explain everything in a simple way without the need to re-draw everything in 2D.
In the future it would be a great idea to use a realistic render engine so the pictures will get lively. Having a detailed model is a good starting point and the next phase should really bring the images to life by using high quality textures, assets and realistic lighting through a good engine.
Residential building of middle storey 'SIBERIAN'
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I would add more trees, especially taller ones. Also due to the logo. And I would also put some curtains or shading elements in the windows to at least partially achieve a sense of privacy. But overall, the visualization is hilarious and in a pleasant mood.
Residential building of middle storey 'SIBERIAN'
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This visualization is very good. The composition is very good.
I would add more detail to the wood texture.
Residential building of middle storey 'SIBERIAN'
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I like the emphasis of the object on the surroundings. I might add more greenery.
vocational training center at Rathnapura
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The general composition, ahmosphere and artificial lighting is good but I find this picture a bit too dark so it´s hard to understand and see the structure of the building. It would be a good idea to light it up a bit and also delete some of the people in the foreground or move them closer to the object so they don´t attract that much focus and make them non-transparent for better realism.
vocational training center at Rathnapura
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I love there hand sketches, they give the whole project more of an artistic feeling and also make it more personalized since everyone has a unique sketching style. Especially those two on the left look quite professional.
vocational training center at Rathnapura
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Nice composition, framing with vegetation and detailed model. Shadows are a bit too strong so we lose the detail.
S Squares
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The architecture is very interesting and with great detail but I find this picture a bit too "wild", it does not have a clear focal point so I get a bit lost. Maybe just by deleting some of the emissive and oversaturated elements the architecture would stand out more, since they steal a lot of attention.
S Squares
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Not quite sure what these dense lines represent so if they have no construction purpose I would consider playing with line thickness and opacity so the really important structure stands out. Otherwise all good.
Sunburst Village
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Lovely project. The visual is consistent in colors, fonts, layout, is easy to read and understand the concept. Visualisations are lively and pleasant, focused on well-chosen materials and greenery. The framing and use of subtle details as birds and rocks is good and takes the realism to a next level.
One suggestion - white text on a light-gray background (sky) might be tricky to read for some people. Think of ways to increase the contrast between the two (text color, framing, background color, positioning etc.)
SANRAKSHAN : A Marine and Coastal Biodiversity Centre in Mumbai
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Some sheets contain too much information and are hard to read on PC. I can imagine it looks amazing on giant printed sheets but it´s not as suitable for the web version. Otherwise, great work!
P.S.: I would use the same font also on the front page for more consistency.
SANRAKSHAN : A Marine and Coastal Biodiversity Centre in Mumbai
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Nice use of colors, atmosphere and details. Looks very soft, gentle and nature-friendly. I would stick to this style with all the visualisations.
SANRAKSHAN : A Marine and Coastal Biodiversity Centre in Mumbai
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I know it´s very tricky with photomatching, but it´s too obivous that the lighting isn´t right here. In these cases it´s okay to make it a bit more artistic than realistic - maybe turn the photo background to black-and-white or use some kind of sketchy style.
Multistory residential building in Novorossiysk town
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I would add more greenry.
Multistory residential building in Novorossiysk town
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I really like the composition.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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I like how the render is colorful and full of life. It has a very positive effect. I would add more detail to the textures and model.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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I would add more detail to the model.
Black Monolith - Cabin in the woods
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The texture on the facade disappears and the whole building thus becomes a uniform strange area, which is visually incomprehensible. The use of greenery is very pleasant. So are the animals. They also have a bad cut, but it doesn't really matter at all. :) The shadows on the trees are a little more confusing.
Black Monolith - Cabin in the woods
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Here could be a bit more ambient light from the roof. And still same issue with texture. Myaby tehere can be some furniture or somethig, explaining funcionality of these nonvertical walls.
Family house
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Very nice interior. I would add more objects to make the space look cozy and inhabited.
Out of sight: Sustainable dance school and emergency social housing in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
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This is very similar to the last picture. For better realism, just add a few details, or rather improvements. The building opposite, which shows the context, is excellent. I like the composition.
Complex of ruined Greenhouse and Wine warehouse
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Great image! You definetely have the technical skills and artistic feeling. And as such I will focus more on the details throughout the images.
1) Flowers in grass - Like the idea, just be careful with how much attention the flowers take. Especially the blue flowers are way too satured in comparison to the nice colorgrading of the rest of the image - I would lower the saturation little bit.
2) Framing - Personally I would frame the image so the building one the left is more prominent and working as a foreground. Either by moving the building or by adjusting the framing. Same goes for the tree on the right side I would move it in a little bit more.
3) Banding in the sky - These stripes usually occur when working in jpgs (or any other compressed file format) in postproduction. The way around this is to work with RAW files in more than 8 bit color depth. Personally I use TIFs.
4) Background through trees - Maybe it is correct this way depending on the reality, but usually I would put either models in the background or simple plane with some photo mapped. This way it feels that the proposal is on a hill or something.
5) Wall texture - I have a feeling that the texture repeats itself especially on the marked side (red). Most softwares today have some sort of UVW randomizer that can help you with this. Also is the scale of the brick wall correct? It is hard to tell but always check the scale of your textures.
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