21 Results
# positive life
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
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Design is a bit too close to the edge of the picture. But whole composition is fine. So it would be fine, to maybe just to move camera few steps back.
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
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The shadows should have a certain gradient and lighten from the roof down. That's probably the only distracting thing here, otherwise it's very nice.
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
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An unusual presentation of architecture, usually in visualizations people try to portray the characters so that they are not very expressive and do not disturb the architecture. In this case, however, it naturally follows the function. Family photography is actually a very good form of presentation.
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Here the difference between the shadows of people and buildings is very significant. Shadows should be darker and with a gradient. The background and foreground of the image would fit together better.
PROT/MAD_[VN+CL+NN]_XX.X: an urban-logistics experiment for the center of Madrid
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Greenery is missing a shadows. So it is not connected with rest of the picture.
Residential building of middle storey 'SIBERIAN'
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I would add more trees, especially taller ones. Also due to the logo. And I would also put some curtains or shading elements in the windows to at least partially achieve a sense of privacy. But overall, the visualization is hilarious and in a pleasant mood.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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I like the mood of this project. I would add more detail to the model and change the orientation of some textures.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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I like how the render is colorful and full of life. It has a very positive effect. I would add more detail to the textures and model.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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I would add more detail to the model.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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Very good visualization. I like the mood and life in this picture. I also like the composition.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
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Very good visualization. I like the mood and life in this picture. I also like the composition. I would use less bright sunshine.
Apartment Building
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This project has a very nice atmosphere. I would add more greenery - stoma, shrubs and 3d grass. I would add more detail to the textures and model.
Apartment Building
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This project has a very nice atmosphere. I would add more greenery - trees, shrubs and 3d grass. I would add more detail to the textures and model.
Apartment Building
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I would add more greenery to the background and objects to balloons.
Apartment Building
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I would add more greenery and detail to the textures and model.
Black Monolith - Cabin in the woods
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Here could be a bit more ambient light from the roof. And still same issue with texture. Myaby tehere can be some furniture or somethig, explaining funcionality of these nonvertical walls.
Family house
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I would add more greenery and detail to the textures. I would adjust the focus of the image.
Arts House in Brussels
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This is a beautiful render, there's not much to complain about. I usually advise caution with puddles and the like, because customers and observers do not always respond to them and rain, but here it makes the most sense. It beautifully shows the contrast of interior and exterior and attracts inside. I can't know to what extent it's a 3d model and how much it's a plot. This in itself is a sign of perfect work.
Complex of ruined Greenhouse and Wine warehouse
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Great image! You definetely have the technical skills and artistic feeling. And as such I will focus more on the details throughout the images.
1) Flowers in grass - Like the idea, just be careful with how much attention the flowers take. Especially the blue flowers are way too satured in comparison to the nice colorgrading of the rest of the image - I would lower the saturation little bit.
2) Framing - Personally I would frame the image so the building one the left is more prominent and working as a foreground. Either by moving the building or by adjusting the framing. Same goes for the tree on the right side I would move it in a little bit more.
3) Banding in the sky - These stripes usually occur when working in jpgs (or any other compressed file format) in postproduction. The way around this is to work with RAW files in more than 8 bit color depth. Personally I use TIFs.
4) Background through trees - Maybe it is correct this way depending on the reality, but usually I would put either models in the background or simple plane with some photo mapped. This way it feels that the proposal is on a hill or something.
5) Wall texture - I have a feeling that the texture repeats itself especially on the marked side (red). Most softwares today have some sort of UVW randomizer that can help you with this. Also is the scale of the brick wall correct? It is hard to tell but always check the scale of your textures.
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