15 Results
# positive people
Beirut : Junction City Project
2D/3D FEEDBACK
When showing public space on this scale, it is good to add more interactions between people. The first look falls on the building, which is positive, then it would like further interest in people's interactions. You should introduce observers to the use of space.
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Textures on the wall are too dark, it is not clear what material it really is. It is connected with shadows in different feedback here. Texture on the vase have a standard issue - bad scale or UV mapping. You should change scale or mapping.
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
2D/3D FEEDBACK
An unusual presentation of architecture, usually in visualizations people try to portray the characters so that they are not very expressive and do not disturb the architecture. In this case, however, it naturally follows the function. Family photography is actually a very good form of presentation.
FARMER’S SHELTER: Home for the Internally Displaced people of Jos, Nigeria.
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Here the difference between the shadows of people and buildings is very significant. Shadows should be darker and with a gradient. The background and foreground of the image would fit together better.
House of Culture and Rest
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Technically nicely mastered visualization, but it is not clear to me from the picture what the use of space is. It would be nice to involve people in what is to happen in that space. If it's a waiting room or an entrance hall, it would be good to add more interaction between the characters.
pavillon de sfax
2D/3D FEEDBACK
It is better to adjust the reflection of the glass using the effect of planar reflections, see here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PCXbPUBSarc
pavillon de sfax
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Red - Lumion contains hundreds of additional models such as coffee, cake, fruit, drinks. It is good to use it.
Blue - It would be better to use a larger focal length indoors, as well as a 2-point perspective. The image will be more readable, but it will also be better to see the contrast of the outer shell with the interior perpendicular shapes.
pavillon de sfax
2D/3D FEEDBACK
There are a lot of lights, but the shadows are too sharp and there is basically only one shadow. It would be good to add some additional lights to the emissive material, also turn on and set the GI, see here: https://youtu.be/RSUO7PFmyUs and here: https://youtu.be/6-0Cxg8xAao
Sunburst Village
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Lovely project. The visual is consistent in colors, fonts, layout, is easy to read and understand the concept. Visualisations are lively and pleasant, focused on well-chosen materials and greenery. The framing and use of subtle details as birds and rocks is good and takes the realism to a next level.
One suggestion - white text on a light-gray background (sky) might be tricky to read for some people. Think of ways to increase the contrast between the two (text color, framing, background color, positioning etc.)
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I like the mood of this project. I would add more detail to the model and change the orientation of some textures.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I would add more detail to the model.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Very good visualization. I like the mood and life in this picture. I also like the composition.
Weaving The Heritage Of Tangail Tat
2D/3D FEEDBACK
Very good visualization. I like the mood and life in this picture. I also like the composition. I would use less bright sunshine.
Apartment Building
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I would add more greenery to the background and objects to balloons.
Apartment Building
2D/3D FEEDBACK
I would add more greenery and detail to the textures and model.
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