Viduranga Bandara
student
Limkokwing university of technology
Sri Lanka
Interior Design
Sabyasachi-Kolkata is delivering the exceptional retail experiences to their customers. Sabyasachi fashion product based on Indian culture and handcrafts. It… more
Hello Viduranga, I hope you are doing well.
I am Jani, a former Inspireli Awards winner and Juror. I have been given the task of giving feedback on your project.
First I would thank you for participating Inspireli Awards. I believe competitions provide large laboratory to exercise new ideas, and this is the perfect place for an architecture student to expres himself and show his worth.
Regarding your project about the retail Interior for "SABYASACHI" I had to study a little bit to learn about the brand. Your topic is very specific and it would be better to give some extra information about Sabyasachi and it's style translated in architectural design for everyone to understand well the project without having to google it.
I really liked the poetic narration of the project and graphic sensitivity to reflect your ideas. Your project also reflects the phylosophy of the designs of Sabyasachi, the imperfection and the traditional motives and paterns, even in the graphic style it is presented in the boards.
It is a very detailed and well explained project, byt my concern is that it is not clearly readable. Here in Inspireli Awards you can upload as many images as you want, and was no need to compress the entire project in three boards. In this project and in further projects in your career make shure that all the information all the text is clearly visible, all the images well presented. Your graphic style suits the topic but when assembling materials for presentation, keep in mind that each drawing should have an intent to explain the project.
In architecture it is very important how the project is served to a wider audience.