Anja Ljujic
student
University of Belgrade, Faculty of Architecture, Belgrade, Serbia
Serbia
Architecture
Biotope addresses the problem of public and green spaces, city fragmentation, water, air and soil pollution, waste management, and social, cultural and… more
Perla Abou Sleiman
advisor
https://www.usek.edu.lb/en/home
Lebanese
Architecture is both the method and product of arranging, planning, and developing shape, space,… more
Dear,
Thank you for submitting and sharing your project.
Love the idea of conceptualization multiple layers and emphasize sustainability and the reinterpretation of green public spaces as a key solution.
However, it would be more interesting to take into consideration the silos building in the conceptualization of the project. The silos building would be an important landmark for the collective memory. Maybe by connecting bridges, pedestrian ramps all over the building to make it part of the project.
In my opinion, 2D plans could have been developed for the comprehension of the functions (public spaces, economic, cultural, social....) . Also developing detailed 3D images would help materialize the idea of your project
Keep going! Good luck in your next project.