Jad Tarek
student
School of Engineering, Future University in Egypt (FUE), Cairo - Department of Architecture
Egypt
Architecture
The project, Al-Wasila: Circle of Life Sanctuary, is inspired by the intricate interconnections within the natural world and aims to foster empathy for all… more
Biniyam Debesa
advisor
Addis College
Ethiopia
My architectural focus is on the major points of architecture: green architecture and parametric… more
Good discription on the proposed project, good presentation skills still I would eliminate some elements to make it more professional but good color choice but a bit overwhelming.
Some of the comments I have
- the space resembles a natural aspect with its curved spaces but it is not clearly specified the space feels a little bit dense for it purpose for it being collecting wild animals
- nice presentation skills
- playfulness of the space is nice but a clear program distribution might help more
- descriptions are nicer but make it less some times
Dear Biniyam Debesa, Thank you so much for your feedback! I really appreciate your kind words about my presentation and color choices. I’ll work on simplifying some elements, balancing the colors, and clarifying the program distribution, especially for the curved spaces and their function. Your advice about reducing the descriptions is also very helpful. Thanks again for taking the time to review my project!